And coincidentally, the poem was written in Spring. As always, my poems are childish, and silly, but I thought I'd share it anyway. ;-)
Winter's gone; welcome Spring!
How cheerful looks everything.
In the trees the birds do sing
While shrubs are busy flowering.
All the world looks glad and bright
In the mellow dawning light.
So, I decided to find another one of my favourite Spring poems - this time by Shakespeare. :)

Nothing wrong with your poem. Clearly you made a serious effort with it. Besides you can never have enough Spring poems. I managed to add a few more to my collection this year
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